Writers Fuel

Writers Fuel

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

 

White spaces saying fill-er-up.

 The fuel I give is unleaded.

Clickety-clack, clickety-clack

The words are now embedded.

 

I write poems of love and truth.

Some are lyrics to a song,

On display for not just me,

The world can read along.

 

M.J.S.

2-17-08

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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haha this is short and sweet..i think it displays your style..i can tell it is a poem by you..lol i feel like i tell you the same things in these reviews..but i cant help it..i love the rhyming, i love the flow of all of your poems..you have some type of signature embedded through the lines of each individual poem..you never make me tired of reading your work because you are so diverse..you dont just speak out on the same-o same-o topics its always something new..but even if it may be on the same topic you never repeat your thoughts its like you find a new way to describe whats goin on in your head..I love it..lol..I enjoyed the read...
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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AK
Love this. It's witty, quick, and sends a great message.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

another great read.
describes exactly what we as writers do :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Real stoking write her Mejasha Love, this world wide web is good for something other than catching us poets in it's tight embrace then? Smiling at you, Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A most clever write, Mejasha....this is great!



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

"White spaces saying fill-er-up" -- A huge motivation for any writer. It's like the world saying, "Wow! I found some room for you to show all those words that are running amok in your head!" This is a nice poem that anyone who writes can appreciate.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

This is great poem. I really like this, nice work!!!

Heather

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfully written. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful! The rhythm was perfect as is the message....well done :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem. Short but it says a lot. Nice work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

haha this is short and sweet..i think it displays your style..i can tell it is a poem by you..lol i feel like i tell you the same things in these reviews..but i cant help it..i love the rhyming, i love the flow of all of your poems..you have some type of signature embedded through the lines of each individual poem..you never make me tired of reading your work because you are so diverse..you dont just speak out on the same-o same-o topics its always something new..but even if it may be on the same topic you never repeat your thoughts its like you find a new way to describe whats goin on in your head..I love it..lol..I enjoyed the read...
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.


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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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