When?

When?

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

 

When you aquire the knowledge

of the part in which you play,

do you just keep playing

or make it better in some way?

 

When you realize reaction

to the action that you do,

will you act according

when it all comes back to you?

 

M.J.S.

 

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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AK
Great questions we should all ask ourselves. Nicely done!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Man like i said before you got that kinda poetry that makes you think..lol my mind starts to wonder after i've read your enticing words..knowledge is a tool the more we inquire the better..we can never have enough..but you right after we get certain knowledge do we just settle for that or should we gain more knowledge in something different and start over again or add on to what we already know..? hard questions that only 'we' ourselves can answer..
"When you realize reaction
to the action that you do,
will you act according
when it all comes back to you?"

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 7, 2008

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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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