The untouchable

 

Life is complete

with physical pleasure

all depending on what you endeaver.

To ensure enjoyment, tangible is obsolete.

The untouchable enlightenment will make you complete.

 

M.J.S.

Reviews

[J. Hampton]

1st off....Gotta love the formatting
( it added to the intent)
tangebility and completeness
who defines....
nice work

Blessssssssssssssssss

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

Another rhyming piece of pleasure poetry..i like the way this one is set up too..another short, sweet,and to the point..i like ya style..i enjoyed it..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s