No Excuse 7-8

No Excuse 7-8

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

There is no excuse for me,
And I haven't found a reason,
So as far as I can see
I am stuck in the wrong season.
Will I ever be set free
From acusations of treason?
Will I be able to be
The reality I'm seizing?

5/11/2016

© 2016 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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A love for haiku poetry developed during world literature studies, inspired by its power to express deep ideas in just a few syllables. The book Blue Harlequin features many of these moments, celebrating the simple beauty of life. Read the full article to explore the essence of haiku poetry: https://aoidemagazine.com/what-is-haiku-poetry/

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Not to be a downer, but his could use some work. Treason seems like the wrong word and a forced rhyme. Seizing doesn't rhyme with season.

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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