Insights

Insights

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Everything is percolated

through your own perception.

Thoughts are then manipulated

by your own conception.

 

The initial ending

 concluded the birth

of the terminal beginning.

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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Sis ~

I always say... "It is...what it is "

we create our own drama...

Blessssssss

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lots of good detail in this.. very good read

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem with great meaning with in each stanza. The only thing is I felt it could of been said without repeating so many times. lol But I suspect that was part of the whole concept of this poem. Well done!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2008
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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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