fractal reflections

 

 

In your eyes

 I see my reflection

 

and in my reflection

I see reflected you

 

and in the reflected you

I see the reflected universe

 

and in the reflected universe

we are one.

 

 

M.J.S.

9-23-07

Reviews

[BLBrown]

Very nice poem...not sure what it has to do with a contest about compassion, is more about love. I enjoyed it nevertheless.

[Coromandel]

this is just totally beautiful=)

[Ivory]

I really like this piece, but I think the mulit colors are a little distracting.
I don't normally like repeating words, but it does work in this piece.
Good write : )

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done like the colors added into each line.. very unique

[L.A. Ostrander]

Well done...thank you for sharing another 'fractal' piece with me...I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

[Emily B]

I had to look up the word fractal before I read this. Very nice. Thanks for sending it my way.