Peace Is All Around You

Peace Is All Around You

A Poem by Mehul Rwat
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This poem is for anyone that is very busy with tasks of life or anyone who is under the stress of worldly problems.

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"Where can one find peace?",
have you ever wondered?
In this busy life of ours that has
     our calm and patience plunder'd.

To obtain true peace,
you need not go far.
Just relax, give a deep breath and
enjoy an ardent star.

Find solace in little things like 
the opening of a bud,
Or the little frogs that play so
joyfully in the mud.

Enjoy the lovely morning,
enjoy the bright noon,
Enjoy the setting sun and
enjoy the silver moon.

You may go out into the nearby woods
whenever you are free,
Find yourself a cosy place or
just sit beneath a tree.

Gently close your eyes and 
try to feel the cool air,
And for the moment leave aside your problems
as if you have ceased to care.

Noticing is the key-You have to notice all 
the good things that happen around you,
Then you will surely know, my busy friend, that
Peace is really all around you!

© 2011 Mehul Rwat


Author's Note

Mehul Rwat
I wrote this some time ago when I too got obsessed with so much work that my heart started to feel burdened. Writing this poem really helped.

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A sincere advise is given through the whole poem.It is really true that the humdrum's of life takes us too far from the real pleasures of the world,your attempt to raise the spirits of people is really appreciating, very optimistic,loved the new theme of the write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Wow. What a lovely poem. Well said, I wholeheartedly agree.

Posted 1 Year Ago


this was soothing to read and some good advice. as i read it i pictured myself sitting with my legs crossed and my eyes closed while someone read this to me. very lovely and insightful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


My Dear Writing Friend,
An excellent poem that I mused for hours. This piece of art I mused for hours. This is why I live in peace here in Alaska; all I have to do is quite my self and breath in nature. You poem made perfect since to me. I loved your chosen word “ardent”; it was a perfect word chosen for a unique write, well done.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

ardent |ˈärdnt|
adjective
enthusiastic or passionate : an ardent baseball fan | an ardent suitor. See note at eager .
• archaic or poetic/literary burning; glowing : the ardent flames.
DERIVATIVES
ardently |ˈɑrdntli| adverb
ORIGIN Middle English : from Old French ardant, from Latin ardens, ardent-, from ardere ‘to burn.’


Posted 12 Years Ago


Whenever i go to my village, the time seems to have stopped. The day seems to be a week. The rest of mind, rest of body and rest of the soul i feel is awesome. But bad luck is that i get a chance to visit the village once or twice in 3-4 years!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Someone give this man a trophy please! lol this piece of write merits the eyes of every reader and the hearts and minds of writers.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow! really good one ......... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


amazing

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a great write. I love the imagery and the point of the message as well. We do need to stop all this striving and just relax and enjoy what God has placed all around us. Nice work.

God Bless

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool job on this, you are lucky to live next to nature.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so beautiful! It is such a sweet and calming poem and is so true! You can find peace all around you =). Do your best! =)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Mehul Rwat
Mehul Rwat

Nainital, Kumaon, India



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I am not a professional writer but one that is trying to come up as a good amateur writer who likes all types of writing genres. Writing is my hobby. I like to write specially on nature and it's beaut.. more..

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