Through Your Eyes

Extrospective View

This simply can't be. Is that what you see? It's blinding

The colors are strange. Your world rearranged, unwinding

From your point of view, I see you're no shrew

Is that what you see when you look at me

Defining

I borrowed your sight, and try as I might, I'm failing

It's like a new world, Flag briskly unfurled, unveiling

So clear with your eyes, the horrible lies,

That's how I appear? Heart hit with my spear?

Impaling

Author's Note

This is an unfinished work and I may add more as inspiration affords.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful, strong and honest words shared. Your words made the thoughts come alive. Thank you Mehameha for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

trying to imagine how others see us, from their perspective...gives us a hint into who we are...and we might realize that our behavior definitely needs to be improved.

j.

[Mehameha]

Thanks again for reading and commenting. I like the concept of this but I feel the style is all wrong. But I had to get something down, right?