Once

A story of a girl.

And at once she didn´t know.

This once she felt insecure.

This once her heart was broken...

She said once never to love again

               She claims...

 

Yet love...

      is an impossible thing...

cannot be faught..

                           Cannot be baught...

Now alone she walks

         alone she pains

Not knowing love can also mend...

        alone she feels where she stands

for there is no telling where she´ll go......

 

One night on December now she lay alone..

   Self pity, one who saw her heartless body saıd, gets you no where to go...

               And so one winter snow..

                             She fell in love once more...

 

Reviews

[WriterMe]

You know, I have read three pieces of poetry on love today. This was the fourth one. In all the other three pieces, they described the joy and magical feeling one gets when they fall in love. No one really describes the death of it and how that feels. You piece showed this girl who had never experiences love, how brutal it could be.. and despite it all, its the first emotion we seek.
Funny isnt it?

In any case, great job =]

--Niki

[Megumi (L)]

Yes I remember writing this I was laying down in the snow.. And I cried. And I couldn�t stop crying...

[topsyturvy]

okay this poem i love the most.:) love lost can always be found again, sometimes not always at the right time or for the right reasons but love always comes in different forms and in different ways..:)