And

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And at the end of the day as she takes off her make-up, her smile

    fades... away.......

 

And her eyes start to fill up with tears...

And she laughs at herself for pretending...

       Yet, her laugh is hollow and lifeless.

And she does a million other things trying to keep her mind off her pain...

And then she runs out of things to do...

           So she remembers

           So she cries....

                 She´s so caught up... In all her fakeness... All her lies...

                 She has no idea what she´s doing,

    Really She´s walking with no real reason...

                           Her fate already decided..

             She´s so... I dunno.... I really can´t say...

                         It´s all so complicated, yet so simple.

            She punched the mirrors, all of them,

   And  She´s never looking back...

               Ever going...

           She´s

  And She´s trying..

And... And... And....

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

That was awesome! I've felt like this a million times before, so I could really relate to your poem. I thought that the way your poem was formatted was really unique and eyecatching. I liked the intriguing story behind your piece, and thought that your poem ended perfectly! It was interesting how the character's emotions changed as the poem progressed, in particular from when she laughed, to the point where she was crying with so much pain.
A really honest poem! I enjoyed reading it.
~PaperHearts

[Megumi (L)]

Arigatoo Gozimasi ! ^^ I�m glad you liked it I cryed for this one too ! ...

[topsyturvy]

sadness fills me as i read this superb write.. it is true with great sorrow comes great artistic tendencies. continue on with this superb-ity. i know there's no such word but either way, let it fuel you for in it will come great success.:)