Your Eyes

For someone I love who wants the best for me. ^^

She turns around and tries to hide her nakedness...

   Her Vunerability...

                           Her Brokeness...

Then you see her broken wings..

           and she lies there waiting to die.

   What is she waiting for ? All she has to do is pick up that knife.

But she had the chance to look into your eyes...

                          And now she wants to Shine...

                   Her broken wings trying fruitfully to fly..

       And so she cries but she won´t gıve up because she got a chance to look into your eyes...

                     So never giving up on herself,

      One day  she promised you she would Shine...

          After looking in your eyes..

Author's Note

Do you like it ? =o

Reviews

[fallen angel]

wow I thought it was beautiful....wonderful way with words

[Megumi (L)]

Awww crap x____x I can�t spell for shıt x____X

[topsyturvy]

i do!^^
note: "vaunerability- vulnerability
"luk"- look
"crys"- cries
you've got potential woman keep writing and hope you get it published, ima buy it if you do, won't care bout the price!^^ so keep it up!