Heart Of Ice

Heart​ ​Of​ ​Ice 

Heart​ ​of​ ​Ice,​ ​Soul​ ​of​ ​Coal 

Years​ ​of​ ​insults​ ​takes​ ​its​ ​toll 

Open​ ​Flesh,​ ​Corrupted​ ​Mind 

To​ ​the​ ​outside world,​ ​they​ ​seem​ ​fine 

Watery​ ​Eyes,​ ​Rosy​ ​Face 

Everyone​ ​thinks​ ​they’re​ ​a​ ​disgrace. 

Always​ ​Alone,​ ​Complete​ ​Isolation,  

Forever​ ​stuck​ ​in​ ​their ​own​ ​damnation.  

Shotgun​ ​Shell,​ ​Wooden​ ​Floor. 

Nothing​ ​worries​ ​them​ ​anymore. 

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

it is good but if you put world before outside it would sound better and flow better. like "to the world outside they seem find." besides that it is good.,yours truly a mad lord

[Karmee]

WOW such imagery in this!
I could see and feel the whole write.
very nicely written.

[Damien Ridge]

This poem reaches out to me. And most likely to a lot of people. Seen others go through it all is hard, but what is harder is their inner struggle. Thank you for sharing, got my heart wrenching a little.