So Seclude Really Rustic

Wrote this poem for my English class. It's about a sad winter day with a special someone :)

The much-missed beauty of fall disappeared

Finally arrived to the end of November

The cruel coldness of winter reappeared

And everything saddeningly frozen through December

Fluffy teardrop-shaped snow floating

Your tousled brown hair looks admirably sparkling

Your beautiful hazel brown eyes twinkle like the stars in the sky

Your painful silence reflects your mood

Your conscience how moody

Frozen blue lake so seclude

While sitting and pondering on the bench

Appearance of spring invitingly full of quench

Author's Note

What can you imagine while reading the poem? :)

Reviews

[TawnyBlueStar]

amazing :) absolutely love it
i think of walking through woods covered in snow and icicles with a special someone :) and spring comes around again YAY :D

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Wonderful imagery, This is a beuatiful write.

[~Lizzy♬]

Awww! I love this poem so freaking much!! :) You're such a talented young writer.

~Lizzy~