Then

I feel as if

I feel for you 

nothing like I used to.

My breath moves

as quickly as the wind does

when your gaze 

falls into my iris 

like the rain falls onto a lake

and makes little ripples,

me dear, golden 

you are all you 

could be to me 

my definition of love

begins with the word you,

and i know 

that you can wash yourself

with sticks and stones

and you say your bones are fine 

but your heart hurts

i know 

i will help 

when you can't glisten 

or listen to what i say 

but darling i will help

when you let me 

you are

who i have looked for

until now 

because

i am eternal 

and that was then. 

Reviews

[Dr.Bell]

I think this piece is a very good. It is an exceptional poem and I was glued to the screen and wanted to continue reading. And, I agree, the ending was sensational. This poem shows a very strong depth in character

[Maxine]

Awwwww! It's so lovely. ♡♥

[MeganCruickshank]

Aw thank you lovely!

[Sydney Dreama]

I love this its so beautiful to read. such good writing. I cant wait to read more. it was wonderful. the words are still dancing in my head. :)

[MeganCruickshank]

Thank you so much this means a lot !

[Sakshi]

Ah... powerful lines...
"i am eternal
and that was then"

beautiful ending!!

[MeganCruickshank]

This is so lovely to hear thank you