Mascara Tears

Mascara Tears

A Poem by -_Josh's Monala_-
"

Let a horrible day get to me.

"

Mascara Tears

I walk upon the valley of the living,

I look down from my sitting,

Watching them scurry around for nothing.

 

My every breath was for you,

I love you with every beat of my fragile heart,

So i must say good-bye to everything to live for.

 

I died for every minute I lost without you,

I stayed to watch the making of my funeral,

The tears on your face made me drift away,

My sanity with in my hands is now deaths toy.

© 2009 -_Josh's Monala_-


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dude levi was right you do need therapy lol jk it was amazing

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it...especially these lines:

"I stayed to watch the making of my funeral,
The tears on your face made me drift away,"

good flow:) great imagery

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it, so deep. My favorite would have to be the second stanza.
Fabulous write/read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very deep and emotional poem. I really like it. Good job expressing yourself =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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-_Josh's Monala_-
-_Josh's Monala_-

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