Confused?

Confused?

A Poem by Megan E Twenter

Confused is what you say
but depressed is what you are
i try to be a friend
but you keep pushing me afar

feelings winding and unwinding
your words dwindling
and redefining

should i try or walk on by
say hello when you say bye

confused is what you make me
what is it you try to say
you hurt all around you
but thats a front you play

you think you have offended
but im not hurt just at dismay
i dont know what card you pulled
but i know this game you play

i created, lived in, passed it on
and somehow you found it true

so dont say you dont know
that youre confused cause you dont know
because you make me feel a way you know
but you claim that you dont know

© 2010 Megan E Twenter


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what to do with a depressed loved one is to support, not feel resentful towards... communication is awesome.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

.....kudos indeed..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like this piece .
I found it relatable ,
and loved the word choices you chose for this poem .
From the title , to the very last verse ,
it intriqued me .

Kudos for making it rhyme . ;]

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 30, 2010
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