You Came

You came in like a ghost

my own haunted dream

you didn't say a word

but you were looking for me

I followed you slowly

as you ascended the stairs

my own heart's possession

you were already there

You came like a violence

fast and ready to push

I fell into silence

I fell into the rush

You came like a wave

on the shore you would crash

I swayed like the sand

underneath the lash

Pulled me out to sea 

waded in the water with me

spun me, sucked me under

till we were one with the beach

You came like lightening

with a flash of great light

you lit up the sky

you made day out of night

You came like a raven

in the blackest of shades

you were hauntingly beautiful

and twice as brave

I came like a whisper

a breathe on your neck

a shiver down your spine

awaiting your wreck

You appeared like a vision

an answer to a prayer

that had not yet been asked

but that my heart shared

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

It's amazing how people come into our lives and how it affects us. Great job!

[Relic]

You have a deep love inside you. Thanks for sharing your talent.


The line awaiting your wreck could be revised. :)

[Chris]

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