Drunk

Do you remember the time

when we sitting on the couch

and you told me that I sucked

and I just began to pout

And then your eyes grew heavy

and a light inside you burst

you looked me in the face

and told me I was the worst

It wasnt how you said it

but the way your hand touched mine

and the room just started spinning

all I could taste was the wine

you said when you first saw me

your heart leaped away

and it jumped into my chest

then asked if it could stay

You asked me if I felt it 

when our eyes first fully met

on the day we exchanged names

but I was just a simple mess

You told me you were scared

and asked me what do we do next

and thats when I said to stop talking

and to kiss my lips instead

It wasnt how you said it

but the way your hand touched mine

and the room just started spinning

all I could taste was the wine

you said when you first saw me

your heart leaped away

and it jumped into my chest

then asked if it could stay

Every day I see you

my heart starts to race

and my palms start to get sweaty

I'm engulfed in a daze

And when those hard hands touch me

I can feel your every thought

and they soften when you hold me

as if my skin is what they sought

It wasnt how you said it

but the way your hand touched mine

and the room just started spinning

all I could taste was the wine

you said when you first saw me

your heart leaped away

and it jumped into my chest

then asked if it could stay

I've been walking back and forth

Feeling like I'm dumb

but when were put together

your presence has me drunk

It wasnt how you said it

but the way your hand touched mine

and the room just started spinning

all I could taste was the wine

you said when you first saw me

your heart leaped away

and it jumped into my chest

then asked if it could stay

I've been walking back and forth

Feeling like I'm dumb

but I dont need a single drop

your presence has me drunk

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

a great 'chorus' to this song....Go and get your guitar

[Samuel Jack]

This a very lyrical poem, not hard to imagine it being sung. I love the chorus or what starts as the third stanza. You paint the story really well into a full picture.

Excellent poem.

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