love like ours

Roses are red

Diamonds are clear

You are the only one

That I can hear

 

My heart beats fast

As I lean in for a hug

Your arms go around me

I feel so snug

 

My love for you radiates

Like a heater in the cold

Baby may I have

Your hands to hold?

 

Your lips press in close

My breath goes fast

Baby..love like ours

Will forever last.

Reviews

[Seanne Tholltree]

the words are easily understood that leaves a vivid image to the reader.

[Wolfwind]

Simple, sweet and enduring. A wonderful run of emotion and simple rhyming cadence that leaves the reader with a smile. Great Ink!

Aaron