This Moment

This Moment

A Poem by MeganRuth

Your touch

Your embrace 

I’ve lost all time and space

Our bodies intertwine

as your lips caress mine.

Lost in your arms,

yet I don’t want to be found.

So many words

yet I don't make a sound.

Forget about tomorrow

Forget about the past

The only thing I want

is to make this moment last. 

© 2018 MeganRuth


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Would every one of such moments could last......"yet I DON'T make a sound", in my opinion sounds and flows better (also echoes the "don't" two lines prior, which is a good poetic device. Just a thought. This is otherwise a great piece, and my enjoyment was thoroughly engaged. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on June 23, 2013
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