One Dance

One cool spring night

you asked me to dance

but I couldn’t hold tight

since we didn’t have a chance

We kept twirling around

the crowded dance floor.

 I didn’t make a sound,

 there could be no more.

I looked in your eyes 

my heart clattered with pain.

I held you tighter,

I couldn’t constrain.

Under the full moon

we still held on

the song played it’s last tune,

but we danced until dawn

Though time sneaked by

and you had to go

But I couldn’t deny 

how I’d miss you so

Now here I am

lost in a trance,

pining for you

all because of one dance.

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

The imagery here has a sad beauty to it. Very nicely done. You're emotions danced through your words.

[zainul]

That "one dance" is a great treasure of your life.
Vividly made your point.
Enjoyed reading.

[MeganRuth]

thanks so much for the review!! Glad you enjoyed!

[zainul]

You are welcome.
You really deserve a nice review.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Under the full moon

we still held on

the song played it’s last tune,

but we danced until dawn

.......lovely lines. I like your wordings in such a way of attraction you are having. With regards.