I wish you knew

When love is but a conquest. When you chase the mystery, dying of curiosity, yet praying you never find out, for once you do, the magic is gone..

"...but I would rather kill myself than have to submit to your will.

     I would rather turn to sand than bow down before your pride.

     Yet this is my one wish: to be able to enter your mind and see what goes              through it..

     Wouldn't that be beautiful..Maybe not..

     Would I be able to handle it? 

     Its this fire of the unknown that makes me fight. 

     What I know already means nothing to me.  

     Stay mysterious forever, my love.

     For the moment I know more of you than I should, my love too will quickly          turn to dust.. 

     And all will then be lost..."

Reviews

[megalOmaniac]

hey emily- i think i disagree with u there.that may well be ur opinion, but even gaining possession of a love u desire is a conquest. not meaning ur love isn't true. i think its a whole melee of complex emotions and contradicting thoughts that really can't be summed up in one or another word. just my opinion.ur entitled to urs. cheers

[Sarah McConnaughey]

That's very beautiful, but I also sense sadness in it. Very eloquently spoken. Great job! :)

[Steve]

This sounds really insightful and full of life! Nice job.

[Emily B]

when love is a conquest, it really isn't love . . .

[The Cute 1]

thats good

[Anicca]

Very very interesting write, I enjoyed this greatly and left me with a great deal to think about. Thank you!

[Samuel Dickens]

Oh, the difficulties of relationships. The road to love is frought with danger, but travel it we must. Either that or stay safely at home....and alone.

[megalOmaniac]

thank u both..ur right..it is a game..n once u've figured it out it holds charm no more..

[Kaotic Barbie]

We always wish we knew what someone else (close to us or maybe not yet close) is thinking. What their next move may be...but its all a game just like life and we have no choice but to guess and wait. Beautiful write.

[Angel's Lady]

For the moment I know more of you than I should, my love too will quickly turn to dust..
And all will then be lost..." ------ I often feel this way, that my love will turn to dust..

Good job! Keep on writing!