'Why is it that the moment you leave, my heart goes cold? Why is it that my heart grows fond, how dare it be that bold? Why is it that the beauty of the raindrops seem lost without your presence? Life without you, breathing without feeling, what truly is the difference?'
'Why is it that my mind wont let me give my heart permission? "Alas My Dear, did you really think your mind is capable of submission?" Why is it that "being alone" has somehow lost its meaning? Why is it that my choicest words now somehow seem demeaning?
'Why has separation without pain been reduced to a wistful dream? Why does everything dull now seem to shine once again agleam? Since when did my little mind game become two-sided? Am i still leading the dance or is the power now divided?'
'Why is it that though he knows I'll never give my all He still stepped off the jagged cliff knowing hes about to fall And now I see I'm losing my hold, Oblivion, do you call? Far beneath me lies Destruction,who's going to catch ME if I fall?'
"'If i fall?' There's no question there. If you fall, you'll pick yourself up and walk Away from your murderer, away from your muse, Away from the one man who'll have you seduced."
'And who do you think you are to tell me what to do?' "Who do you think I am? I'M BUT ANOTHER PART OF YOU"
We are all complex and multi faceted in ourselves In that I must agree
You present your thoughts clearly emplying a regular rhyme scheme but sadly you pay no attention to meter. So read aloud,the acid test your words do not flow smoothly
Having said that I enjoyed the read
This is epic. I like your choice of words, you really bring it together, very nice work.
"Since when did my little mind game become two-sided?
Am i still leading the dance or is the power now divided?'" I enjoyed this line for many reasosn.
We are all complex and multi faceted in ourselves In that I must agree
You present your thoughts clearly emplying a regular rhyme scheme but sadly you pay no attention to meter. So read aloud,the acid test your words do not flow smoothly
Having said that I enjoyed the read
@serah..i had absolutely no idea about that :) thank u.it makes perfect sense. each of us have two different personalities.sometimes even more..i sometimes wonder if i have mpd. i have these characters in my head.all me n all so diverse. n when they all start to clash with one another, i feel like i dont know who i am.but we'll get there :)
. ah, well said ... and it's fascinating how you wrote this piece with questions and that actually makes it more definitive ... and did you know ... that according to greek mythology ... human beings had two faces and four arms et al ... and it was zeus who split them into two ... that's the origin of the concept of a soul mate ... thought i'd share that with you ... :) ...
Like so many other people, I, too am looking for a place where I belong. I'm not exactly bubbly and I certainly am NOT a social butterfly. I prefer to keep to myself, in this perfect world that exists.. more..