Cadence

When love shines strong despite the distance. Inspired by the song 'Cadence of her last breath' by Nightwish. I wrote my own version.

Somewhere in the distance, a lonesome soul longs,
For but the cadence of His last breath..

Apart for days and ages, torn apart by the hand of Fate,
She'll always have His heart..

Fueled by hatred she lives on, fueled by longing,
Hatred for every soul that looks upon His face, her face..
For the sun that warms His morning..

For that one precious memory, for her true love's first kiss,
Stab after stab for wish after wish..
Time reluctantly lets fall every grain of sand, cursing their power,
Until Fate's merciless hand turns the hourglass over,
Here begins the unending shower..

Helpless, consumed by the ever growing fire,
Prisoners of time and space..
Many more than once she wonders if she'll ever see His face..

Life His mortal enemy, 
He seeks release in death..
To her, life's tortures a worthy price to bear,
But for the cadence of His last breath..

Reviews

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a beautiful love breathes
in the aura of these words
it strings together 'togetherness'
and whispers gently to the birds

lives immersed in love
never churn or diminish
love's story is endless
a story words can't finish

. just my thoughts ... about your inspiring thoughts ... you write amazingly well ...

[megalOmaniac]

@ G- im not sure you'll like it :) its goth metal..thank u for the comment.

[The Cougar's Den]

Helpless, consumed by the ever growing fire,
Prisoners of time and space..

Man, oh man, have I ever felt that before....

I don't know the song, but I'm going to look it up now.