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I watched you as you held the

blade, over our hands as

you promised that it would rain.

I crossed my fingers behind my back,

I would be your little secret like that.

You grinned and I watched the images

swim over your head again, I begged and begged

for you to stop, but you just smiled and the images went

on.

Blood, blood, drips down, the blade hits me and I feel the 

meltdown.

I cry and sob but you just sit there and smile.

I hate you I hate you but I would still run a mile for you. 

Author's Note

This doesn't make any sense :D

Reviews

[Dezzyray]

i like this alot! i don't know how to explain it but it's sweet in my opinion :3

[i like people]

To Sunny:
i dont know i found it and it looked pretty :D

[idk]

By the way, i need to ask, whats with the picture you usedd?

[paradise]

You say it doesnt make sense but it al matters on the persons perspective and it all poetry is just mixed emotions displayed in a different way I thought it was great I understood it in my way but I loved it anyway

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

that's the thing about poetry it doesn't always have to make sense if you enjoy writing and you get your emotions and point across then it shouldn't matter...i really enjoyed reading this poem...it was awesome

[EMMIE]

POETRY DOESN'T ALWAYS MAKE SENSE THAT DOESN'T MAKE IT LESS POWERFUL OR IMAGINATIVE. GOOD WORK

[idk]

Woah I love it. It doesn`t matter if it doesnt make sense, it`s still really good. Nice job. Keep writing :)

[trippy kitty]

This didn't make anything sense and that's what makes it so f*****g cool. I'm curious to find out who the person is, why this happening, ect. Great write.

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Hey idc if it doesn't make sense I love it :3