You're Name Is...

You're Name Is...

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a short story :]

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  Your name is Damien Kobs. You're 16 years old and you live in Ontario. You don't have a lot of friends, but that's okay. You like to be alone. 
  You're at school, walking through the halls by yourself when you hear the doors slam open to the corridor with a loud BANG. All of the students in the hall fall silent. You turn your head to look at who entered the school, when the first bullet comes flying through the air.
  Everyone screams as the bullet dodges past you and heads straight for Chelsea Smiles-who is standing in shock, unable to move.
  Now, I'm gonna stop there.
  Hell of a cliff hanger, huh?
  Now you, Damien Kobs, have 3 options:
  1) Let the shooter kill Chelsea, who you have never talked to before nor care about.
  2) Run in front of Chelsea right before the bullet hits her, resulting in you dying.
  3) Run away, saving yourself. 
  Time is ticking, Damien. You don't want to make the wrong decision, now do you? 

© 2011 i like people


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You can do anything, at this point because "the bullet dodges past you and heads straight for Chelsea Smiles". You can only stand in front of the bullet before it reaches you. Given the speed of a bullet, you can't warn Chelsea either. If you really believe in a loving God (who asks us to call him father) - then Chelsea never dies (she just shifts reality). It is from us, that she is removed - until our end comes.

I'm Ann, I'm a student and I have very few friends in real life. I'm usually alone in my library/room reading, writing or studying. It's a shame that when you try to help people be less angry and bitter - they don't care. The point being, while you can't do anything after the trigger is pulled (except pray) - you can do something before; to prevent the trigger from being pulled.

Posted 13 Years Ago


LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow very interesting i love it and I would probably choose option number two or make a new door openor to save my self and maybe push her to the floor saving her but her falling

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this! Makes you think :) Interesting, keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this! I have no idea of what I would do!

Posted 13 Years Ago


IM SORRY, YALL BUT MY A** IS RUNNING AND NEVER LOOKING BACK. SELFISH AND HEARTLESS I KNOW. WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE AT ONE POINT OR ANOTHER.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would generally almost always give up my life for someone else's. Not to mention it's kind of heartless to run away and/or just let her die. I love this btw it's awesome

Posted 13 Years Ago


i would pick option 2 dont ask why...i loved the story it was interesting but also dramatic...great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would beg the shooter to kill me.
Good story by the way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice... I would do choice two. I don't care if they weren't my friend. It would just be the right thing to do. Plus their is a chance that I would make it through. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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