Around And Around, Over And Over

Wake up.

Go to school.

Survive.

Go home.

Eat.

Sleep.

Wake up.

Go to school.

Feel yourself weaken.

Go home.

Eat.

Sleep.

Wake up.

Go to school.

Cry in the bathroom stall.

Go home.

Eat a little.

Sleep.

Wake up.

Go to school.

Cry again.

Go home.

Refuse to eat.

Cut yourself.

Wake up.

Fake sick.

Get a noose.

Hang yourself.

Sleep.

Sleep.

Sleep.

Sleep. 

Reviews

Theme sounds to me like the routines and perspective of a emo high schooler. The minimalistic structure used to describe it seems to evaluate it as either boring or overly simplified. Idk if this is either an evaluation of today's generation stereotypical followers known as being "scene" or just a simple to the point description of what one does when being a depressed teenager.
Either way, format and structure is really the highlight of the poem and worth of praise.

[Nick]

Most people our age can relate to this.

[Ryan Miller]

Depressing..But good.

[paradise]

Damn this is good i can relate alot it has alot of power in it

[Julia]

i kind of loved this ! wow haha its great ...love the style . i can relate . great work(:

[trippy kitty]

This was good. I liked the ending how it just said 'sleep' a bunch of times. Gave it that poetic, creepy, vibe thing.

[Seshat Nidaba]

You do realize it's a lot better than

Wake up
Go to work....

Cherish these days! I kid you not.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Omg....this was chilling....

[EMMIE]

OH WOW. THIS IS CHILLED. CREATIVE. I LIKE THE "NO SENTENCE" STRUCTURE. JUST WORDS AND POWER. AWESOME WRITE.

[Kyle]

This is positively chilling.....