Another One

Another girl
another face
another body that's
going to waste.

You're just another boy
another monster another
creature haunting me.

Quicksand pushes me under and
I try to see, I try to believe that
this is way.

But it's hard to see when my vision is
clouding up and when thoughts are
in the way.

I'm just another girl
another face
another body that's
going to waste.

You're just another boy
another monster another
creature haunting me,
and I never wanted it more.

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I love that one , you put it simple , thats refreshing

[Eagle Cruagh]

Very nice poem.
Write often.
-=----- Eagle Cruagh

[paradise]

Amazing thts all i can sauy

[TawnyBlueStar]

hi,
wow, this is awesome :) it feels a bit like a song, i like it :D

[trippy kitty]

I liked this a lot. I don't really know what else to say, I just loved it.

[Kyle]

I like this! Good job. I like how this is not too complicated or overly wordy. I like that you put your heart out there with this one and it sounds nice....

[idk]

Wow. You are an amazing writer :) Can't wait to see more of your work :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this poem! That's how I feel...at times, but we have to be strong. We have to show men that we have the perseverance to survive their games. I do feel like not all men are monsters, but some can be. Thanks for sharing.