My Mind

I have a friend that lives behind my 

eyes. She is in my brain.

She tells me what to do, she orders me around.

She is the mistress and I am a slave.

She yells at me to put the knife to my wrist,

to the put the noose around my neck.

I don't want to listen.

But then she would get mad.

I do as she says, and when I do,

she smiles and grins knowing that

I am a part of her too. 

Reviews

[trippy kitty]

This was wonderful. It was creative and I loved reading it. Everyone has that little voice inside of their head and I like how you expressed that in only 11 lines. Great poem.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. It was very nicely written. I feel like this could happen to someone in real life. I feel bad for that person. I loved the emotions within this. I wouldn't want to listen either if I were that person. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

[idk]

Wow. This is amazing. I love it. Great job :)