garnished erotica

probe my flesh

with your magic wand

long past dawn

a swarm down my stomach

short of givings

all evil aside

i'm open for the taking

beautifully so

garnished erotica

slightly nurtured

you'll find me quite a treat

to a man like you

all evil aside

i wish you'd be

the unintentional demon

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very erotic freeverse write as the protagonist opens up and invites penetration with plundered intentions.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as Sun spot said, yes there seems to be a flow of erotica, but too often it is blatant rather than subtle and poetic...this is poetic in its delivery...and such a good last stanza...to be the unintentional demon...
love that concept.
j.

[Another Relic]

There seems to be a rash of erotica flowing in the site's pages lately. All evil aside, you're poem is enough to draw pleasant images and a happy ending.