The Journey Of The Wise Man II

EXPERIMENTAL

The wise man
Travelled across the seas
On his two feet
And the wisdom he stole from god

The wise man found love
But love was too abstract
And so was his heart
So he kept travelling

The wise man found hope
But hope was also abstract
And so are words
So he kept travelling

The wise man found happiness
But happiness seemed false
And so seemed the smiles
So he kept travelling

The wise man found religion
But he saw in religion
The same things he saw in love, hope, and happiness
So he kept travelling

The wise man found richness
But richness could not be trusted
Because richness drew the untrustworthy
So he kept travelling

The wise man
Felt bored and lost
But he kept travelling

Reviews

[David Scott]

Hello again Winter. I read all three and I think my comments on the other two would be the accurate review from my point of view... This is just a personal opinion and you should take it for this and only this. Creativity takes many forms. Some art forms affront me. Other forms of art leave me ambivalent. Naturally we all want to experience new art and expand our artistic pallet. So, take my words as only a preference of style unless my advice resonates with something internal to what you are trying to accomplish artistically.