Blue eyes

Blue eyes

A Poem by Tamika Finley

Those soft blue eyes..
Clasping fallacious verity..
Flawed innocence and purity..

Your lying blue eyes..
Could never be true..
Shallow and askew..
I see right through you..

Using your light blue eyes..
To facade life..
A shield you secrete behind..
Desiring for blind..
Remember only cowards hide..

Reveal your crazed blue eyes..
For the world to see..
You put on to be cool..
While you're cold beyond reasoning..

I hate your false blue eyes..
With the brown ones up under..
Contacts to change the color..
You've disgusted me like none other.

© 2015 Tamika Finley


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Aaaaaah the lying blue eyes...in more ways than one...lying about their color and lyng about their true nature. Enjoyed. ( : O )

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

9 Years Ago

thank you! glad to hear u enjoyed it :)
I really enjoyed this. At first, I wondered if this person's eyes were blue because of a cold, callous nature. But, of course you answered my question in the last stanza.

"Your lying blue eyes..Could never be true..Shallow and askew. I see right through you.."
That is my favorite. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

9 Years Ago

thank you so much! happy to hear that you enjoyed it. thanks for reading darling.
I really like this. Very well written, indeed. keep coming up with more. Enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

9 Years Ago

thank you so much! I will. glad you enjoyed

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Tamika Finley
Tamika Finley

Detroit, MI



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I am from Detroit, Michigan but I'll be moving to Florida to start my college experience in the fall. I love to read and write, listen to music, laugh. Sex and the city, Dexter and that 70's show are .. more..

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