Flow

Flow

A Poem by Tamika Finley

Surfboard ride..
Comes along tide..
From which you can't hide..
It's not a monster under the bed..
Nor an imagination figment..
More like a storm or when it snows..
How it's hot in summer and winters are cold..
An occurrence being natural..
The sea's waves..
Refuse any tame..
If you didn't now you know..
That with the earth's flow..
Where the wind blows..
go.

© 2015 Tamika Finley


Author's Note

Tamika Finley
Could be better but needed to write so this may be a little eh..

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I liked this because it makes the reader (me) want to follow the wind and see where it takes me.

Thanks for the read

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

9 Years Ago

that's what I was aiming for. no problem thanks for reading :)
It's not eh...I thought it was great:) I know how it is to need to write. Don't second guess yourself, you're very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tamika Finley

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :) I feel better about it because of your review.

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Tamika Finley
Tamika Finley

Detroit, MI



About
I am from Detroit, Michigan but I'll be moving to Florida to start my college experience in the fall. I love to read and write, listen to music, laugh. Sex and the city, Dexter and that 70's show are .. more..

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