Cloud 19

I would smile..

Thinking of how you made me feel..

Able to relate..

To the lyrics played..

From  the Cloud 19 Mixtape..

You used to be my escape..

Just the thought of you was a getaway..

I cherished you..

Moments together, I couldn't wait..

Days at the park just being a compact taste..

Of our forever only a few ages away..

I loved that..

I loved us..

I cherished "us"..

It was that us that made me keep the mixtape on replay..

Cloud 19 being the most played mixtape..

Engross in you while in the shower playing this mixtape..

And I was just being played..

Like an outplayed Cloud 19 mixtape.

Reviews

[J. K. Hannah]

Cloud 19, fascinating title. I interpret it as something even higher than Cloud 9, maybe the Cloud 9 of a 19-year-old?

I liked the rhyme all the way from the first line to the "only a few ages away" line, it really put the lines on top of each other- tightening the poem. Tight - "compact," like their love I guess.

I liked the line "Our forever only a few ages away." Ironic to put "forever" in the future.

[Tamika Finley]

Thank you so much. I got the title from an actual mixtape. It's call "Cloud 19" and by a r&b singer, Kehlani. um, the 19 year old cloud 9 makes a lot of sense to me now that you mention it. But thanks a whole lot for the review and I am glad you enjoyed it

[Chris]

Ouch... last two lines were a bit raw.

Sometimes I wonder though... people really bein played or is it that neither really has a clue at that point what life is bringing at them? Yeah I know if its based on knowing lies to lay some pipe its wrong but sometimes neither has any pipe in mind - life just happens and both get overwhelmed in their nows. And damn it hurts - really does... but dealin is what we do all our lives... ya know?

[Tamika Finley]

I'm definitely learning. But yeah, sometime it may be someone clueless, or playing clueless, just content with the lies for the temporary joy. and sometimes, it's a player and someone being played.

[Chris]

we do have our learning times... don't we.

[Tamika Finley]

I can't say we don't, so yes, we do.