Seconds...is all I need

Minutes...
              Too long for  thoughts that I cannot wait to utter

Hours...
              Too late for feelings that would show how my heart flutter

Days...
              Too far to tell you how much I yearn

                                 All I need is....
Seconds

Reviews

[Nancy]

Awww...Thanks for your amazing review...glad you like it, they say less is more, I couldn't disagree.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing use of words. You made your point loud and clear in the poem. I like the set-up and the hope in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nancy]

Thank you Louis, glad you like

[K. Louis]

I liked how you played with the form on this and sizing of the font with the concept of time.