Can't you hear?

A poem from my past writer's cafe account.

You say that I'm worthless

Not worth you precious time

Obscuring your ^{red hazed} vision

Now I'm _drawing the line

If I'm such a nusaince

Why is your hand in mine?

If I'm so sorry

Why are you on your knees?

Begging for forgivess?

Oh, Pu-lease!

So now your sorry?

Please, you make me ^laugh

I can see _{right through}

Your bloodstained mask

^{I'm slipping off the edge}

On the line between anger and rage

Go ahead on your merry way

Your w***e rampage

Worthless behind my back

The world when I'm near

There's nothing you have to say

That i could bear to hear

Get off your knees

Stop cowering in fear

Now its over

Can't you hear?

Reviews

[Dawn]

I like this one hun, considering you only been writing for a year, your writing is great. I like the use of colours as well makes it really stand out well. Thanks for the comment, and thanks for the welcome...

Dawn