Love has no limit

Live once, love once

Beautiful is the feeling when voice of your love raises you up.
When you just not listen to him, you feel him with in you.
When you feel your love not with you but within you.
Growing with your love makes you mature.
Accepting your love as it is makes your feelings pure.
My love no matter what you are, how you are, what you have faced,
I accept you as you.
Acceptance makes me strong makes me come alive. All pain within you, coming with you are warmly greeted.
I don't want to walk ahead nor behind, I want to be with you.
if granted within you.
My love doesn't expects you to love me back, only expectation is grant me respect I deserve.
You are like water on my fist, free to move anywhere.
My love is fist providing base to our love.
I promise my fist will never clutch you within.
I want you to be happy always. Every time you listen to my name I want you to smile and think even in my life there was a mad female who loved me more than anyone could.
No matter where my soul leads it's loyal to your soul.
Physical existence is simply a mirage.

Author's Note

This is my first writing.

Reviews

[Hiroshi Masters]

You definitely have potential here and need to make a 3 or 4 stanza... In my opinion its such a beautiful poem... Theres nothing wrong,

I suggest you should read more about people work then apply in your own style! :) :) Keep writing!

[Sami Khalil]

Very true and straightforward. You touch the right nerves. A splendid poem...:)................

[dexterous sam]

congrats ...as a tyro u did it very well...every emotions of the feeling that we called love just embark to prove that relationship is merely not based on physical existence ,not materialistic pleasure ...it is the feeling of comfort ....or being united even after the death ....really a nice piece of art ....stupendous ...i 'll hope u write some more poems.....:))))))

[CRBain]

Very pretty for a non-native english speaker. I'd try to work on sentence structure a bit. I enjoy this.

[Medha]

Thank you. I will work on it.

[Sow Beet]

I like your candor in the authors note :) This is a subject I never tire of exploring. I like the imagery and movement in the lines about water and fist. We are dependent on them and yet both can be very destructive.

[Medha]

Thank you so much. I am glad you read it.