RETHINKING

departure of memories, i don't write about someone no more

There once was a time, we never knew,

Came and went so soon; warning was

Needed, it just passed; the moment of

Our. Maybe it was for the better, but

If you ever want to rethink, we’re

Still friends, maybe we can get a way.

I’m sure, I’ll not bother you, if you

Ask me even once but I just have our

Memories, and that shall be it; maybe 

Nights of gloom but you shall always

Bloom; even with others, maybe this was

To end and you and I could finally find a way.

Out of this mess, cause I believe

More than me to you. Wish you the very

Best of life; even if not with me.

May, I be the last to be yours,

Never be sad, or upset; though

You don’t seem to know. Sincerely.

Author's Note

i wrote it some time ago, and did some improvisations, any mistakes to be pointed out please!

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

This seems like an answer to a painful letter received by a friend or lover.... what you say is that you seem to understand why breakup happened and you feel sad, but you accept it ....maybe rethinking it might bring you together...and if that doesn't work, I'll still have your memories, you seem to be a bit apologetic in this letter..."never be sad or upset".....You will find a way to be happy. Nicely done!
Warmly, B