Diamonds

her glow and toughness of a diamond dims the cuts made on another rock.

Shiny sparkly cuts on blues,

Having them brings some news,

Hard if real, broken when not,

Maybe that’s how I prevent my clot.

 

Worked on characters of my,

Maybe the perfect time for bye;

Rare if natural, common under white coats,

Shown on many hands and throats.

 

Strived to attain, cries of mines,

Maybe they aren’t worth; mines,

Precious as it seems always,

Packaged well, it then portrays

 

“Don’t Judge A Book By Its Cover.”

Why don’t you stop looking at the shine of her,

Deceived by sparks and her glow,

All I ask to my, “why self meaning so low?”

Author's Note

not upon anyone:)
just fractions of experiences with people

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

you should not judge somebody by the jewelry they wear, especially diamonds... what's underneath is what matters, bot the sparkle or the shine or the size; what difference does it really make
even if it is a fake! Don't get me wrong diamonds are nice but a person's character is more important....
Warmly, B

[Anita Frader]

My mother ingrained in me that superficial appearances do not measure true worth or value. There's a sense of disillusionment with the superficiality of judgments based solely on appearances, with a plea to look deeper and not judge solely by outward shine.

[Secretpoet]

I wholeheartedly agree, people's outer looks is always a cast to themselves and others

[Dave Brown]

sounds like a search for that perfect person which is someone very hard to find

[Secretpoet]

but what's the use when they are leaving?
anyways diamonds are people who are rare and make you feel better at all times :)