Little moments

Final life,

Final days,

I want to feel good,

Once over again.

 

Ending world;

Burning down,

I want to have a good time,

Once over again.

 

Some time;

Some moments,

With my favourite people,

Once over again.

 

Sweet talks;

Bitter truth,

Let me live this time,

Once over again.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

This is life shared, emotions and all. Like night and day, we all experience the good and bad, learning how and what with and by them all, sad thought that is and yet there in the corners is true happiness

Guess there are times when one wonders 'what next - how much more?! Your four times repeated question reads ominous.. the past suffering too many emotions

Wishing you more peace, hope and hands to hold.

[Secretpoet]

I totally agree with your point and thank you for your review!!

[emmajoygreen]

Sometimes unsure whether or not to comment about the content or writing. Please feel free to tell me, if you want.

[Secretpoet]

thank you so much, I'm trying to improve my english and you are a great help

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, secretpoet.You are doing very well. Good luck, take care.

[Secretpoet]

thank you so much, I really appreciate you

[Ken Simm.]

I would greatly like to be associated with the gentle words of the above poet.

[Secretpoet]

thank you so much for your kind words >_

[Davidgeo]

It's quite sad but very beautiful.

[Secretpoet]

thank you so much!

[Betty Hermelee]

A bittersweet poem reflecting on life’s good times and sad times; and wanting to make the best of all of it; also to connect with one’s we love before it’s one’s time to leave this planet….lovely choice of words and a very honest piece.
Warmly,
B.

[Secretpoet]

thank you so much for your appreciation!

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome!
Warmly, B

[Chris Shaw]

So much said in this short piece. So much between the lines. Life has precious moments. We want to share those with people we love. I felt a sadness here.

Chris

[Secretpoet]

I agree wholeheartedly with your comment and I'm grateful that you took your time to express how you felt about this sensitive topic.