The sea to see life

The poem describes a person sinking in the Dead Sea, emphasizing isolation and the absence of life; trying to leave problems and leave peacefully but the waves aren't in favor.

Slowly sinking in the dead sea,

Where no life resides with me.

A deep silence; painting of life,

Problems up the surface, the strife.

Why can’t I let all go?

Why is there a ray of life to show?

Author's Note

criticize the most, praise the least

Reviews

[June bug]

I like it, I see no reason to criticize it. I'm not that at criticizing any way. I did like what you had to say.

[Secretpoet]

I appreciate you so much.