Necessary Name Change

You lost? Follow

the only light you

see into The Darkness.

Tunnel beneath

the skin of the matter,

you may find meaning.

You may find nothing.

But, at least you’ll

have stopped calling

everything around you

The Darkness.

And people might

even stop hiding their

children when you're

around.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Brilliant. I had to laugh. A strong piece.

[freelancejouster]

cleverly constructed. i like the feel of it, the dig below and come out bloody or enlightened and probably both kind of poem.

maybe just a leash is needed.

[Chris]

Poetic... but, keep hiding the children.

Chuckling here

[roarke]

two statements. If only and don't count on it.

little shards, big picture, god help us all if you take the chains off.....