oopselete

A Poem by Tim Lion

I prove I'm alive by playing dead

but

nobody notices either

© 2011 Tim Lion

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Robin

I think I just saw Elvis ...

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kenneth The Poet

Too true, sir.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

roarke

hahaahahaha. BINGO. .... and, and... what if they did?
It's better than the reverse isn't it?
pass the cocoa butter, will ya?

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 14, 2011
Last Updated on October 14, 2011

Author

Tim Lion

Lake Worth, FL

About

Sometimes, when the moon presses her naked chest to my window, and my wife is carving the value from trash scraps, I feel like I may never be able to outshine my finite timeline. And the worst part is.. more..

Writing

oh sorry,

A Poem by Tim Lion

sad sometimes

A Poem by Tim Lion

!(inspiration)!

A Poem by Tim Lion

[more writing]

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