implosion feels

implosion feels.

time lies.

eons sleep.

you whisper.

neon dreams.

Dad drinks.

sex bruises.

space wants.

death crawls.

Mom dies.

drugs ooze.

trees fall.

chimneys belch.

smoke breathes.

witches burn.

Sister calls.

birds steal.

words drown.

Brother snorts.

sky taunts.

legs tingle.

horror reels.

insects buzz.

implosion feels.

 

God hides behind the distractions

with a fire in his eyes and a knife in his hand.

Reviews

[roarke]

..... um, do you think you may have Sweeny Todd and God confused a bit? .... doesn't matter.

the plinko grand prize game of life.... all ya gotta do is start at the top and make yer way down.

I'm just gonna sit down a minute, until my head stops reeling, it's ok, you go on without me, I'll try to catch up, really.

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

That last line is brilliant! After the very rhythmical, hard hitting torrent of images it finishes with a real bang.