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A Chapter by Tim Lion

something gorgeous

has crawled

from the starlight

and into the deepest

valley of my tropical love

to die.

I am but a graveyard

for wing-plucked angels;

ideas and emotions

who never got to fly.

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© 2011 Tim Lion

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MissWordSmith

I'm not sure what I CAN say about this. Short, but AMAZINGLY thought provoking! So imaginative and creative, and beautiful altogether! The concept was so fresh, and yet so unheard of, yet you made it sound so special. This was gorgeous! and so.. WOW.
=)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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roarke

.... to die? really? hmmmm..... angels can surprise ya when ya least expect it.... next? The magic will amaze you.....

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OT	oh this is brilliant! you are on top form my friend! Posted 13 Years Ago oh this is brilliant! you are on top form my friend! Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissWordSmith

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily B

you're on a roll . . . this is gorgeous

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Added on July 20, 2011
Last Updated on July 20, 2011

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a song sings her face through ..

By Tim Lion

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Tim Lion

Lake Worth, FL

About

Sometimes, when the moon presses her naked chest to my window, and my wife is carving the value from trash scraps, I feel like I may never be able to outshine my finite timeline. And the worst part is.. more..