ADDicted Eye-dripper

ADDicted Eye-dripper

A Poem by Tim Lion

Mountain Dew & bacon grease

Pop the pill and masturbate

Swing the gate and enter in

Electric tomb-womb haze

 

American atrocity

Mommy’s little middle-ager

Major complications

With reality control

 

Smoke a bowl & numb the ache

X-Box coffin-couch A.C.

Syndromes built to ease the truth

ADDicted to the slump

 

Dry-hump the ecstasy

Purpose hung in sleep-stasis

Creepy bathrobe troglodyte

Vampire-infant-flee

 

Knee-deep in peach nectar

Sucking on the honeycomb

Eye-roll, eggroll, over-burn

Turning in the sun

 

Wannabe philosophizer

Belly-jiggling chin-dipper

Wildflower tipping point

Sodomize the need

 

Mother-corpse consumerism

Semen-stained economy

Cigarettes and Vaseline  

Keeping death alive

In the end it starts again

Reset the PlayStation

Frustration reroute

Taxpayer sewer grate

 

Nothing great to share

© 2011 Tim Lion


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What a rant! Somehow with you leading the band, I want to fall in line and march along.
You have captured the milieu of 21st Century nothingness, with its fixation on sexuality, materialism, instant gratification and boredom. Something very important has been lost from the psyche of modern man - higher purpose.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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When I read this I see a man sitting in his recliner with the television in front of him, he's flipping through the almost infinite channels with the only thing that he will ever be able to control in life, the remote. There are the snippets of what he sees of the world through the tube and snippets of his thoughts, meshing to become something else entirely. Great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, not with that resume.... lol

now THAT'S scary.

Very contemporary, profane, and unnerving in an ADD sort of way. Back off the gluten dude, mountain dew:bad, bacon grease: good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a rant! Somehow with you leading the band, I want to fall in line and march along.
You have captured the milieu of 21st Century nothingness, with its fixation on sexuality, materialism, instant gratification and boredom. Something very important has been lost from the psyche of modern man - higher purpose.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Prrrrrriceless! I love when you get mad. It makes for excellent word soup.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tim Lion
Tim Lion

Lake Worth, FL



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Sometimes, when the moon presses her naked chest to my window, and my wife is carving the value from trash scraps, I feel like I may never be able to outshine my finite timeline. And the worst part is.. more..

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oh sorry, oh sorry,

A Poem by Tim Lion



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