Suffication

This darkness closing around me
Its dark
Its cold
Its wet
As i sit here alone
All I can think is what I did to get here
To be sitting here alone
Haunted by the memories surrounding me
The smiles
Hugs
Kisses
Conversations
All the times you said those beautiful words
You know the ones
I smile as i rememeber looking at you as your lips move to the rhythm of
"I Love  You"
I tear falls from my cheek
Heart slows and feels like its being crushed
Pain is settling in again as i remember
PLEASE TAKE IT BACK
Take everything you said
promised
given
made me feel
take it all back i cant endure this anymore
It hurts so much to know she is in your arms
when they belong around me
I wonder what happened to you saying
Never in my life will i hurt you
Then days, weeks, months went by
Everyday you hurt me
Your "speeches"
Lies
Promises
I believed them all
Yet everyone was a lie
How can you live with yourself
You do this to all the girls you know
You play them
Sure some dont act like they care
They DO
It isnt  a easy thing
People get attached
No matter what they say
Childish males
Think they can play with us
Play with our emotions
Hurt us constantly
And walk away like nothing happened
NO
NOT ANYMORE
If you want me i'm going to make you prove it
I'm tired of being hurt
Being alone
Being the FOOL
The one you can toy around with and play with.
Im done with you
If you want me PROVE IT
My heart cant take anymore......

Reviews

[Mistaken]

the flow is amazing and this is so powerful....

you need to keep writing or the world will be a less intriquing place haha... this is again amazing.. I love it you are a great writer

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I smile as i rememeber looking at you as your lips move to the rhythm of
"I Love You"

I love that part... what a wonderfully powerful piece of free verse poetry... wanting it all to go away so you don't have to relieve it alone. An impressive poem.

[Orlando Murcia]

Emotional and a lot of anger
and frustration, pain and weariness


Great write Mechelle

Orlando M