Temperature

My meaning of temperature

It always changes.

Sometimes hot and sometimes cold.

It's rarely constant.

Author's Note

This poem is not entirely about the subject at all.
I'm actually referring to someone here (Ssshhhhh....)
I only used temperature as a symbolism...
(^_^)

Reviews

[twinklestar]

Cute ;)

[Meallea Pomorette]

Thanks...

[luviva]

u r ryt.. never constant!! but what the point of it's behaviour?? thats the major question!

[Meallea Pomorette]

I don't really know...
I only used temperature as a symbolism..
Anyway, thanks for reading...

[khalid]

i dont think that temperature is either hot or cold...if it is cold in winter and hot in summer, there are two other seasons when it maybe neither cold or hot..it can be cool, warm..

[Meallea Pomorette]

I don't really know...
From what I really know, temperature is the average kinetic energy of the molecules...
Thermodynamics is not my favorite topic...
Anyway, thanks for reading...

[DrD]

And why is it always so pessimistic? Why can't it be "partly sunny?" But in the land of eternal spring . . . . southern Mexico into Guatemala, etc. . . . it doesn't hold true. The weather is rather stable and constant. But if you are referring to a peson here, "sometimes hot and sometimes cold . . . ." and "rarely constant" . . . then it must be a woman. Enough said. I wish you'd try something longer to show the scope of your skill. You might be surprised.

[Meallea Pomorette]

I'd try to write something longer again soon...
Thanks for reading...

[Sid]

The note gives it more meaning and depth, it is indeed hard to deal with fickle characters. This is well written...good write!!

[Meallea Pomorette]

Thanks...

[David Scott]

Yes, these little verses do lend themselves to inuendo... I can relate.

[Meallea Pomorette]

Thanks...

[Hamza]

how true ... in context to your description ...
fluctuations are hard to handle .. but that's part of everyone's lives ..
knowingly and unknowingly everybody has them ...

[Meallea Pomorette]

Thanks for reading...

[Zenithex]

Nice

[Meallea Pomorette]

Thanks...

[beautiful dreamer]

i love how your poems are always short and sweet :)

[Meallea Pomorette]

Thanks...

[Tex]

A haiku!

Very nice.

I love it!

Instead of using It, It's... you could use He, He's or she, she's... then your double meaning shines through. (see my poem "She loves me - she pains me" I use the title to do the trick in that one)

[Meallea Pomorette]

thanks...
(^_^)