Through thick or thin, even through the direst ploy
Ever since my
childhood you’re always there with me.
The tears, the laughter, the pranks, the horrors, the faults,
You’ve seen it all, just impassively watching me
Even when everything’s put in a sudden halt.
You are always my
playmate and my enemy.
Still, among other things I treasure you the most.
Even though you’re motionless you stand out for me
And bring me merriness without even a cost.
You are my pillow in
the middle of sadness,
My sole listener in the midst of a big mess,
My punching bag in the noisy world of madness,
And the chaser of nightmares in my sleeplessness.
But through thick or
thin, even through the direst ploy,
You stayed and bore with me until the end of it.
I am thanking you for that my dearest stuffed toy.
You’re ready fall with me in the deepest pit.
This is soooooooo cute, I definitely know this... my Gloria (stuffed cat) is the sole person, well, toy I can talk to who's unbiased and will just let me vent for a while... who is tattered by life, my life, but is still here with me ever since childhood. Touching, little poem indeed, well done ;)
I loved it... get ready for this... I am 54 years old and still have 2 stuffed toys from when I was a child. Keep them! they are well worn but are now antiques on display in the home. a real conversation piece. and just seeing them on occasion brings me joy.
very nice write.
the layers of meaning did not escape me. Well done.
I wrote a song for the 10 year old girls in my life, it is meant to be innocent and fun, I would love you to review it, I value your view. It is "Jonathan - My True Love (song)"
thanks again for a great write!
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thanks for reading... I really love my stuffed toy with all my heart...
I"ll read your song...
Oh yes, a toy. It is nicely depicted. Well written.
You're lucky, you know? Because I, I don't have even a memory about loving toys, and even treating them as best friends. Well, yeah, just sharing. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Aaahhh... It seems to me you hadn't met Schatz yet... But Mr. Cruz and the others did... Meryle won'.. read moreAaahhh... It seems to me you hadn't met Schatz yet... But Mr. Cruz and the others did... Meryle won't even let it go...
:P
12 Years Ago
Who is that? O.o Is that your teddy?
12 Years Ago
Yes... it's my cute stuffed toy...
I brought it to school once (camping) and then the get toge.. read moreYes... it's my cute stuffed toy...
I brought it to school once (camping) and then the get together last time...
i can feel your feelings about your best friend
and every one knows they have great role in o.. read morei can feel your feelings about your best friend
and every one knows they have great role in ones life
12 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing... I agree with that but sadly my best friend and I miles apart so my only comp.. read moreThanks for reviewing... I agree with that but sadly my best friend and I miles apart so my only companion now is the stuffed toy she gave me... :(
12 Years Ago
thats really sad :(
somethings happen and they are beyond our control so we cant do anything t.. read morethats really sad :(
somethings happen and they are beyond our control so we cant do anything there just move on
12 Years Ago
The "move on" part is kind of hard to do though...
12 Years Ago
yeah i know
but we can and it is the only way :)
i hope you may understand
12 Years Ago
Yes, I totally understand and it is really heartbreaking ...
Anyway I hope it will soon pass... read moreYes, I totally understand and it is really heartbreaking ...
Anyway I hope it will soon pass...