Inspite of the difficulties the narrative encourages ther person he speaks to to carry on. He speaks from understanding, for he claims he knows how he feels (because he was in those dark places himself.) I could feel the hope the narrative gives to the one in despair. The advice the narrative gives is also quite wise, and are not assumptions, but as I mentioned earlier - come from experience.
Glad you shared!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, my friend!
8 Years Ago
Any time. Will be glad to read more of your writings ;)
I liked the hope and the positive energy of the poetry.
'I’m right here,
To help you.
We’ll fight through,
Again."
I liked the flow of thoughts leading to above hopeful ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Interesting mix. Lyrics and voice remind me of Blink 182. Music has an almost Cult sound to it. Makes for a different kind of review. The words work. I would probably have shaved off about a minute of the intro.
Personal preference. Again, this is a different kind of review. Overall, I liked it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jon! I definitely have that punk influence in there. Thanks for the support and taking the ti.. read moreThanks Jon! I definitely have that punk influence in there. Thanks for the support and taking the time to listen, my friend!
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